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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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folds in clothing are a tricky thing to grasp, i would suggest to portray folds unrealistically, to make them more believeable. What you're doing looks like you drew the body and erased certain areas of the body to draw in the folds. Folds crease and form sharper and more rigid forms that you might think, and it's often better to exagerate them a bit more to get a good idea of how the clothing is draped. I think in your case you were trying to show how tight the clothing is, but some relief from that would do wonders. The right shoulder seems to be a bit too exposed and far up for this perspective, and the left foot appears to be uncomfortably bent. However overall the pose is rather more complex and you achieved it quite well, feet are hard to draw, but remember joints only go so far, and studying the joints in your feet will help
This piece is composed quite well, the colours pop around the page but in good harmony, and all the graphic elements help to support the image.
overall again you're improving yourself at a good pace and i love the graffiti on Nori's pants, keep it up``
Kinda elongated, but otherwise it's nice ^^.
How many layers did it take?