ooo coool i love the graffiti idea in the background, and in general it has his very pop art like feel, the two letter P's kinda are hard to find...so it looks like aples, so just be aware next time lol, i rather like the strong contrast and flat colours that you have on the girl and especially on her box head, so it might have been nice to concentrate less on details on your OC in the front and maintain that graffiti style.
folds in clothing are a tricky thing to grasp, i would suggest to portray folds unrealistically, to make them more believeable. What you're doing looks like you drew the body and erased certain areas of the body to draw in the folds. Folds crease and form sharper and more rigid forms that you might think, and it's often better to exagerate them a bit more to get a good idea of how the clothing is draped. I think in your case you were trying to show how tight the clothing is, but some relief from that would do wonders. The right shoulder seems to be a bit too exposed and far up for this perspective, and the left foot appears to be uncomfortably bent. However overall the pose is rather more complex and you achieved it quite well, feet are hard to draw, but remember joints only go so far, and studying the joints in your feet will help
This piece is composed quite well, the colours pop around the page but in good harmony, and all the graphic elements help to support the image. overall again you're improving yourself at a good pace and i love the graffiti on Nori's pants, keep it up``
folds in clothing are a tricky thing to grasp, i would suggest to portray folds unrealistically, to make them more believeable. What you're doing looks like you drew the body and erased certain areas of the body to draw in the folds. Folds crease and form sharper and more rigid forms that you might think, and it's often better to exagerate them a bit more to get a good idea of how the clothing is draped. I think in your case you were trying to show how tight the clothing is, but some relief from that would do wonders. The right shoulder seems to be a bit too exposed and far up for this perspective, and the left foot appears to be uncomfortably bent. However overall the pose is rather more complex and you achieved it quite well, feet are hard to draw, but remember joints only go so far, and studying the joints in your feet will help
This piece is composed quite well, the colours pop around the page but in good harmony, and all the graphic elements help to support the image.
overall again you're improving yourself at a good pace and i love the graffiti on Nori's pants, keep it up``
Kinda elongated, but otherwise it's nice ^^.
How many layers did it take?